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Wednesday, December 5, 2018

A bird facing a whole lot of red people

My story of a bird facing
A whole lot of red people

Once there was a bird minding his own
Business. until someone
COMES DASHING
TOWARDS HIM AND KNOCK
THE BIRD OUT.

The bird wakes up only to be
Locked to see a red
Short person not to say a lot
Of short little people saying
Some foreign language
As the the wind blows in the Bird
Face BRRRRRRRRRR in cold.

The bird was frighten of who
Was there so the bird called
Who's there so the short little
Person not to say a million
Of short little red people came
Out of the shadows of Excitement.

He struggled and struggled
But could not escape so the bird closed his eyes as the
Red people coming
Closer and closer.
And just as the People going eat the bird
The bird had a rope cutter so the bird tried to reach out for his rope cutter.
the Red people was going to Turn him. So the
Bird stretched out his
Feathers arm grab the rope cutter and he cut the rope
And escapes. But the Red people never gave up so they had their spare ready And a red
Bandana over his head and
The leader yield an a other foreign language. but
The red people did not understand so they jumped of A cliff REEEEEEEEEEEEE
  And they were never seen again. (lol) :p
The bird felt tired so the  bird glided
down to a tree slept until the morning. (12 hours later)
The bird woke up as he felt wet
Oh wait it was pouring instead
But it was a sunny morning. and so the bird got ready to fly
He stretch out he's wings and
Was prepare to fly home he
Felt happy when he got home

And they lived happily ever after.

The end.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Malakiah,
    I love your writing it's very exciting and, your title actually confused me but it was still amazing.

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  2. Hi Malakiah,

    It looks like you have the hang of posting on your blog now. That's great!

    Your story is interesting but a little difficult to read. Some of the sentences don't quite make sense. Did you proofread this before you published? Sometimes it's good to find a quiet place and read it aloud.

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